Friday, 27 July 2012

Awakening

 

Awakening
by marja


Slowly drifting, leaving life
outside my sight, shifting
inside a place where noise
expels the murmer of water


A storm of thoughts,
A rumble of thunder,
silencing the rolling waves
crashing against the boat

An orchestra of discord,
conducts a spell on
a morning when rays feet

 leave sparkles on water

As swiftly as lightning
flashes of tranquillity
splashes of fresh water
awaken a blissful soul

Tuning in to soothing sound
entering paradise
while mind’s noise
leaves at the backdoor




11 comments:

  1. Beautifully-worded, so detailed and neat! Thanks for sharing it!
    Best, Mariya Koleva
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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  2. Loved your words and their emphasis !!!

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  3. Great photo and matching verse. Well done!

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  4. We all need minds noise to leave out the back door.....beautiful writing here! :-)

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  5. ...good images, good writing.

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  6. This was beautiful and such a great escape! Loved it~

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  7. Very beautiful writing,Marja!Well done!

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