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Thursday, 3 April 2025

A love letter to the past

 

A Love Letter to the Past

My fingers trace a face in a photograph,
a moment from when streets were lined with dwellings,
built on dreams as fragile as frail old ladies.

Light as feathers, we moved through life,
swaying like sunflowers in a summer breeze,
spilling wine, love, and strawberry kisses.

Love landed like a flock of birds,
spreading its wings in delight,
rising into the starry night
as we held hands,
setting it free
drifting toward eternity.

I dipped my fingers into honey
and whispered words onto paper.
They danced, a tender tango
on my tongue,
until sweetness lifted into the world,
my spirit softening into serenity.

We became finer versions of ourselves.
I carried that part into the future,
where secrets dwell in my mind.

Life is still built on dreams.
And I am opening up to it
as I did the first time I met you.

16 comments:

  1. I like the idea that sometimes love makes us finer versions of ourselves...it is wonderful that when one opens oneself to dreams they can enrich one's life!

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  2. How time passes. I love the ethereal quality of these reflections so beautifully expressed.

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  3. How lovely, love landing like a flock of birds. Such a beautiful poem.

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  4. What a delight to read the poem Marja, especially the lines :

    "I dipped my fingers into honey
    and whispered words onto paper.
    They danced, a tender tango
    on my tongue,
    until sweetness lifted into the world,
    my spirit softening into serenity."....

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  5. What a tender poem, Marja.. I love the images of love landing like a flock of birds...and of words dancing a tango on the tongue...

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  6. The imagery sings, Marja, of the past, yes, but also the hope that it has brought for the future.

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  7. How lovely, in the telling and the being.

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  8. ...and to be able to soar like a bid! Enjoy your weekend.

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  9. A lovely remembrance, a beautiful moment captured and preserved, just like the colour of sunlight in a jar of honey,

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  10. Beautiful and so sensual. I feel uplifted and hopeful.

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  11. Beautiful imagery. It is like a written photograph, hung from ink, and there when you want to go back and remember.

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  12. I dipped my fingers into honey
    and whispered words onto paper.

    Love that imagery.

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  13. "Life is still built on dreams." Ever renewed and renewing." Absolutely lovely.

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Thank you!!