Wednesday, 19 September 2007

Maykes poem





TOMORROW
By Mayke Blom

Over the sea that shines
A treasure lies
 Across the line
A cloudy staircase appears
We collide for a while
Fall into a puff of dreams

A memory hides
Petal flutter strokes window screen
Butterfly shivers
Erase panic thoughts
Deep inside carved snow

Love me more than tomorrow


 Behind a tangled column
We smile at its young glow
We live with the stars
It raised yesterday

6 comments:

  1. Hi Marja! Mayke wrote this? It's so beautiful!!!! I love it. And I adore the lines "we live with the stars/ it raised yesterday" -- this really touched my heart deeply.
    :)

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  2. Beautiful poem, very peaceful, calm and with hope. Thanks for sharing it.

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  3. fall into a puff of dreams - a wonderful line, as is love me more than tomorrow. so glad I found your site!

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  4. I'll passed your lovely comments
    on to Mayke. I think she is good and special in many ways.
    She is going to be 15 soon.

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  5. This poem is full of rich imagery. The last line is awesome. I enjoy reading this poem. I like it very much.

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  6. This is really really GOOD...and at that age! Please don't stop writing. I just read all your poems..wonderful:)Greetings to you Mayke and Marja...thank you for the award..Lets rock together in blogland!

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