I engage with the world
as if learning the piano
exploring to find the right keys
to create harmony
often striking the wrong chords
forming a cacophony
filling the air with
an invisible wall
between me and the other
Until somebody grasps
the song that I play
I become me and
we pour out our hearts
into a golden bowl
of understanding
Unspoken words ripen and mix
with the complementary
ingredients of the mind
of the other
The safety found
equalling a mother's lap
awakens the child
music becomes play
and with fun and laughter
and with fun and laughter
A symphony develops
of two souls becoming one.
of two souls becoming one.
The one called friendship
Friendship as music. Good one!
ReplyDelete"Spoken words ripen and mix
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ingredients of the mind
of the other"
nice... I guess somewhere its more of the unspoken word that mixes..
Thanks baba
ReplyDeleteYou are right rambler I took it out but I will put it back in again.
If that's what a rough draft reads like, then I give up! Lovely poem , great analogy topped off with a pretty picture! Excellent.
ReplyDeleteBlogging gave me great friends around the world.
ReplyDeleteYou are really a great poet.
Thanks for the Bday gift.
Thank you
beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteI especially like the second stanza and "Unspoken words / ripen and mix". The idea of hearing past the mistakes to the heart was lovely.
ReplyDeleteLike the poem.
ReplyDeleteThere is small typo! It should be cacophony.
*often striking the wrong chords
ReplyDeleteforming a cacophony
filling the air with
an invisible wall
between me and the other*
True--sometimes misunderstandings do creep in--but like you said--when symphony develops, two souls become one.Nicely expressed.
You've evoked friendship very well here.
ReplyDeleteI like the comparison of friendship to harmonious music
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful and true poem again,Marja!Really good!
ReplyDeleteMarja, beautiful and moving words. Sometimes I wonder if it is all worth it.
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Exquisite. I'm still writing about friendship for this week and reading this has influenced me to take a more positive turn. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteHow lovely! The poem is perfect!
ReplyDeleteYou have displayed friendship very well with your words Marja. Like you, I also linked to Keith's poem on friendship but I have yet to come up with something that is all mine in originality.
ReplyDeleteIt's indeed a symphony, Marja, I love the way you portray the beauty of friendship, thank you.
ReplyDeletei absolutely love this....how poetically spoken...
ReplyDeleteFriendships and music, it seems are related. I love the theme!
ReplyDeleteThis is so eloquent and beautiful! It's especially meaningful to me because I'm a musician (a pianist, as a matter of fact!), and I love the imagery you've used.
ReplyDeleteWhat a delight :)
G'day Marja, from Australia (just around the corner from you!)
ReplyDeleteI came here from Ann's blog. I'd never heard of Writers' Island before, but I'd love to help ....
I post a series called `Telling Write From Wrong' on my blog, which is updated four or five times a day.
I haven't updated the series for a while as I was finishing off my second novel, but I answer questions from writers of every description ....
I'm a professional journalist, by the way.
Would love to hear from you ....
Cheers
David
What beautiful music you have made here... a song of friendship that touches the heart...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Marja! I love the harmony analogy for friendship....and perhaps each friend we have offers up a new take on the harmony.
ReplyDeleteenjoy your week.
Thank you all very much for your lovely comments. i feel blessed
ReplyDeleteThe link of friendship as music developing into a symphony is wonderful! Well done, you!
ReplyDeleteThanks YOU for your beautiful poem. You make true friendship like poetry in motion!
ReplyDeleteI love this Marja. We are missing you.
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