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Wednesday, 30 January 2019

Light on the lake



A long time ago I tried to conquer the darkness but all I had to do was to find the light.
Is darkness the absence of light? yes, but even if the light isn't there, it will be somewhere else, as the sun always shines. 




Light on the Lake

I once let darkness in
not knowing how its tar-black threads
would tangle with my thoughts.
I fed it, called it friend,
and slowly vanished into the night.

But one day, breathless in its grip,
I cut the shroud, and through the tear
a sliver of light slipped in,
calling me to gentler ground.

I learned to dodge its shadows,
to see the snares for what they were.
I walked, I watched, I wondered
and one day paused beside a lake.

The water lapped in lullabies.
Snowcaps shimmered on its skin,
sunlight brushed across the waves
and beauty made me rise.

I danced with light upon the lake,
its silver soaking through my eyes.
The spark I sought had found me.
I held the amulet I’d missed.

That day, I let the light move in.
I didn’t know its quiet reach
could tune my heart to joy again—
but I appeared inside the light.


42 comments:

  1. "No, I was feeding it, befriending it / I disappeared into the night"...Love the play of darkness here.

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  2. It is we who invite light or darkness is... absolutely!

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    1. Yes I think so We are more in control then we tend to believe

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    2. And yet some people are absolutely terrified of issuing the invitation to Light.

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  3. Wow! I resonate with the birth imagery here, and what it takes to embrace life.

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    1. Thanks I love your use of birth imagery. I hadn't thought of that before

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  4. Hi Marja - excellent poem ... I can quite easily see sitting down at the lake, listening as the water lapped the shore, then admiring the snow caps painted on its surface with brush strokes from the sun ... it does look as though its painted on - cheers Hilary

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    1. Thanks Yes nothing better than such a beautiful place :)

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  5. Emerging from darkness into light....the journey all humankind must make. Beautiful, Marja. The photo is gorgeous, the play of light on water is spectacular.

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    1. Thanks Sherry I agree a lot of people go through a transformation when they get older. In real life that lake is even more beautiful.

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  6. Darkness can devour us alive if we allow it.. love this beautiful and evocative write, Marja!❤️

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  7. "No, I was feeding it, befriending it
    I disappeared into the night"

    These lines carry an intriguing sci fi quality. A nice expose of the courtship of darkness

    Much💟love

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    1. Haha I love how you say courtship. Thanks

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  8. A wonderful write about the journey from darkness!!

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  9. What a beautiful read I really enjoyed it with a great picture to illustrate it. (PS I just wonder whether in the second line of the first verse it should read "...back then how")

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    1. Thanks and thanks for the tip. I changed it. English is my second language and I often get these kind of things wrong :)

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  10. It comes down to a choice.It's darkness verses light.Darkness is a formidable opponent and it's a continual struggle to stay in the light.

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    1. Yes I know but sometimes you just find the light and you can learn how to tap into or at least I could :)

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  11. I like the way the poem and reader follow the steps towards the light, Marja. I also like the effective use of alliteration in ‘tarry tentacles’ and the honesty of the lines:
    ‘I was feeding it, befriending it
    I disappeared into the night’.
    You’ve also evoked that feeling of being smothered by darkness in ‘black cloth made me gasp for breath’.

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  12. WOW Marja what a powerful poem and beautiful photo!
    The quest for light has always been important to me. Mine is not a search for literal light - more, the search for direction, a message, a cleaning away of uncertainty and the recognition of inner spirit and authenticity.

    Occasionally, life seems to be a chasm - a pit I slip and slide into. There is sometimes a sense of overwhelming darkness and no light ahead. What I have learned is that there is always light, I'm just not looking for it in the right place.

    That special light can come from any direction. A chance remark, a line in a magazine which starts me thinking, the sound of children playing, the words of a song, a comment overheard on the bus - all and any can give insight and a way through. When times are tough I have now learnt to keep my ears and heart open.

    Namaste dear friend
    Peggy xxxxxx

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    1. "the search for direction, a message, a cleaning away of uncertainty and the recognition of inner spirit and authenticity." Great words poetic Thanks I feel aligned with that, I think we all look for direction but just get some signs that we are in the right road. We don't get to know all the secrets. It's easy in this world to get lost in the dark but we are getting better and better in to pickup and channel the light. Namaste xxx

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  13. I relate. We have to stand up to it, otherwise we'll live in misery.

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    1. Yes we have to fight to find the way again

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  14. Your photo beautifully signifies purity. The prose can be viewed as a "ringing of the bells" in the way that it shows how lightness breaks through attachments to darkness. It reminded me of words by Leonard Cohen who wrote: “There is a crack, a crack in everything (there is a crack in everything). That's how the light gets in.”

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    1. That is exactly right " how light breaks through attachments to darkness" Love that I know that song from Cohen He was a brilliant poet and singer song writer

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  15. Wonderful Marja, it isn't until we sit and realise all that we have carried within and cut through that dark cloth that have cloaked us in its many layers, that we truly begin to see the light as we begin to shine once more.
    beautiful words in your poetry Marja.. So impressed by your words and the Image.
    Much love my friend <3

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    1. Thanks so much Sue and yes you are totally right

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  16. Beautifully descriptive, Marja. The photo is fab too.

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  17. Such a sensitive and beautiful poem. Looking at that awesome landscape would be inspiring and invite the light within. One of my friends’ mother in France went into terrible darkness after her husband passed away, she never was whole again. I felt total grief when my husband passed away 3 months ago but I also refused to have the darkness take hold of me. I do get sad but I fight to see life and light around me. As you, I invite the light in – a moving poem. Thanks for coming to my blog when I was unable to visit blogs, I am starting again.

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    1. Thanks dear yes the darkness gets all of us when we go through hard times We can only conquer the dark with light

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  18. I love your poem and how you speak of a landscape that so many have to go through on their journey in life. Beautifully rendered, Marja. I hope you and your family are well. Sorry not to have been by in recent months but the changes of life have caught me up and held me fast. Be well.

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    1. Thank you Renee Nice to see you We are well We are in the middle of summer with high temperatures and have had a great time with many visitors from oversees

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  19. The eternal theme of light and darkness, and what goes between the two. The lake in your picture looks like an intermediate factor, it has both light and darkness: white snow caps on its surface, but surrounded by dark greenery.This kind of duality is almost everywhere in our life.

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  20. Yes very good observation and I agree duality is part of life

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  21. Ik was je een tijdje kwijt, maar dankzij je reactie of mijn blog weer teruggevonden. Fijn dat het goed met je gaat en dat je mooie gedichten schrijft.

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  22. Such a lovely and serene place. Your words go with it so well.

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Thank you!!