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Sunday, 7 January 2024

A new beginning

Rosemarie from Poets and Storytellers United asked us to write about beginning.


Happy New Year to all of you!!











Crimson anticipation

A new beginning drips
like honey from today
sweet, but slow,
fear still clinging
beneath the surface.

You shiver as old ways crumble,
setting your first step
on a new and gentle earth,
where buds swell before spring,
where trees lean into blossom,
their pale pink whispering
of cherries yet to come.

Move forward in anticipation
of fruit, plump and crimson,
a tender bite, a burst of juice.
Growing and blossoming
the quiet roots
of everything sweet to come.


12 comments:

  1. It is refreshing to see new beginning at the start of 2024

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  2. Oh, what a yummy poem! (Allusions intended.) Beautiful, Marja. Enjoy your holiday.

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  3. "A new begining," you have written it so very pretty, and with such an optomistic vein bulging from your lines.
    Enjoy your holiday!! And
    HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
    ...
    Jim
    ...

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  4. Happy New Year, Marja, to you and yours! Dragons are beneath the surface but I like the optimism in your new beginnings. If we go within … the outlook can become how we want it to be.

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  5. Hi Marja - new beginnings ... sometimes we need to note - you've described them superbly here - we are fortunate, so many aren't ... enjoy your time with family and Happy New Year - cheers Hilary

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  6. I love the idea of new beginnings being "the start of all things sweet". We need sweetness in our lives. And what a blessing it would be to get it right at the start.

    Happy New Year, Marja!

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  7. I like your last two lines. Very nice.

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  8. Your poem is "pleasing to my poetry palate" .... Happy New Year!!!

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  9. I love your new beginning. To go forth without fear. :)

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  10. I love the sweet comparisons in this, Marja.

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  11. Your poetry is pleasing to my palate , I love it. And happy new year Marja

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Thank you!!