Shared with What's going on Prompt: Peace
Under the chestnut tree
The fabric of humanity is
stained.
It reeks of poverty of empathy
dreams shattered
in the shadows
of dark dimensions
the domain of dictators,
where drums beat
for power and greed.
I kneel upon this ground,
longing to find truth
in a world
hardened by fear.
My heart drifts
in the waters of hope,
lapping at the shore,
whispering the arrival
of the wild white dove
I sit beneath a chestnut tree
simply to be.
Come, sit with me.
What we need is peace,
not passive,
but born of understanding,
born of the mother of love,
warming our spirits
beneath the rustling leaves.
Your poem beautifully captures the tension between despair and hope, inviting us to seek peace and healing beneath the sheltering branches of compassion and love.
ReplyDeleteThanks roentare you nailed it
DeleteThis makes me think of that old poem, "Under the Spreading Chestnut Tree, the village smithy stands . . . " There definitely is a poverty of empathy these days. Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Yvonne
DeleteHi Marja - it's a beautiful poem ... with some marvellous scenic thoughts in there - yes please I'd join you ... we do so need peace. Cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteI am delighted you join me dear Hilary
Delete"My heart drifts
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Between despair and hope there lies a zone of drifting, and then you ask a friend to join. Powerful!
Nice movement towards empathy in this poem 👏
ReplyDeleteI love the salve that beautiful chestnut trees gifts you - a tender poem - Jae
ReplyDeleteI'm waiting for the arrival of the wild white dove too. I saw that at one gathering, the monks walking across America released some. Your closing lines are so comforting. And we are so in need of comfort.
ReplyDeleteYou so often find a way of expressing things that are original and insightfuil. Your last verse is that for me! Beautiful writing.
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem that balances between abject horror and absolute peace. The choice is ours to make, Marja, and we need to act appropriately!
ReplyDeleteAmen to that.
ReplyDeleteI will dream of sitting under that chestnut tree waiting for the wild, white dove.
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