Poets and storyteller United invite us to write about the time of day you like best, and why
Dusk
I
like to visit dusk
when
the day folds inward,
when
twilight drapes a thin veil
over
the land.
I
step into a listening light
that,
like liquid silk,
rests
on red roses,
remembering
their names.
The
sky whispers its old instruction:
let
the day loosen its grip,
let
your thoughts thin
and
wander among the stars.
From
the black mantle of night,
let
unseen hands
practice
their quiet healing.
And
when dawn
touches
the window lightly,
open
the door,
so
the universe may pass
through
you.
Lindíssimo poema dessa hora mágica do dia!
ReplyDeleteAdorei!
beijos, chica
Cosy, clear and beautiful images. 👏
ReplyDeleteYour poem feels very warm and comforting- with beautiful imagery as well - Jae
ReplyDeleteOh, that is exquisite!
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery. Love the idea of a listening light and of the universe passing through us.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful... Rall
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of the universe passing through us at dawn.
ReplyDeleteDear Marja, the image and poem are really beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLove it all, but that closing stanza is BLAMMO good!
ReplyDeleteA beautifully written sequence of times. Thank you.
ReplyDelete"Let the day loosen its grip" is a nice way to describe the feeling of bedtime.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteI love the dusk too - when the Sun meets the moon and blushes like a young lover. The colour of his cheeks spread all over the earth like liquid silk - and everything we see then appears nice, pretty, and instantly lovable.
A lovely time of day.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, dear Marja,
ReplyDeleteYour poem "Dusk" brings beautiful images to mind! I think dusk is also one of the most beautiful times for me, especially in summer when it's too hot during the day... (but we're still miles - or rather, months - away from that here 😉.) Your poem made me involuntarily think of the film title "From Dusk Till Dawn"...)
I also want to thank you for your lovely comment on my previous travelogue chapter. Yes, I know you also have herons and kingfishers in New Zealand – I think I saw both. (I'm quite certain about the kingfisher; it was the day after we met, when we were at the CCP in Sumner.) And no, the Cardinals didn't let me hand-feed them – only chickadees (and nuthatches also came to David).
Hugs and all the best, Traude
https://rostrose.blogspot.com/2026/01/reisebericht-2025-drei-parks-am.html
So well written. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWat een wonderschoon gedicht. Ik zie het tafereel voor me. De stilte en de rust die van de schemering uitgaat. Je hoeft je er alleen maar aan over te geven om ervan te kunnen genieten. Of in huis zitten, kijken hoe het buiten 'schemert' en het licht pas aandoen wanneer het donker is. Bijna een magisch moment.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous images, Marja!
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