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Friday, 23 January 2026

Dusk

Poets and storyteller United invite us to write about the time of day you like best, and why












Dusk 

I like to visit dusk
when the day folds inward,
when twilight drapes a thin veil
over the land.

I step into a listening light
that, like liquid silk,
rests on red roses,
remembering their names.

The sky whispers its old instruction:
let the day loosen its grip,
let your thoughts thin
and wander among the stars.

From the black mantle of night,
let unseen hands
practice their quiet healing.

And when dawn
touches the window lightly,
open the door,
so the universe may pass
through you.


17 comments:

  1. Lindíssimo poema dessa hora mágica do dia!
    Adorei!
    beijos, chica

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  2. Cosy, clear and beautiful images. 👏

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  3. Your poem feels very warm and comforting- with beautiful imagery as well - Jae

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  4. Oh, that is exquisite!

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  5. Wonderful imagery. Love the idea of a listening light and of the universe passing through us.

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  6. Just beautiful... Rall

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  7. I love the idea of the universe passing through us at dawn.

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  8. Dear Marja, the image and poem are really beautiful!

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  9. Love it all, but that closing stanza is BLAMMO good!

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  10. A beautifully written sequence of times. Thank you.

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  11. "Let the day loosen its grip" is a nice way to describe the feeling of bedtime.

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  12. Beautiful poem!
    I love the dusk too - when the Sun meets the moon and blushes like a young lover. The colour of his cheeks spread all over the earth like liquid silk - and everything we see then appears nice, pretty, and instantly lovable.

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  13. Kia Ora, dear Marja,
    Your poem "Dusk" brings beautiful images to mind! I think dusk is also one of the most beautiful times for me, especially in summer when it's too hot during the day... (but we're still miles - or rather, months - away from that here 😉.) Your poem made me involuntarily think of the film title "From Dusk Till Dawn"...)
    I also want to thank you for your lovely comment on my previous travelogue chapter. Yes, I know you also have herons and kingfishers in New Zealand – I think I saw both. (I'm quite certain about the kingfisher; it was the day after we met, when we were at the CCP in Sumner.) And no, the Cardinals didn't let me hand-feed them – only chickadees (and nuthatches also came to David).
    Hugs and all the best, Traude
    https://rostrose.blogspot.com/2026/01/reisebericht-2025-drei-parks-am.html

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  14. So well written. Thanks for sharing.

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  15. Wat een wonderschoon gedicht. Ik zie het tafereel voor me. De stilte en de rust die van de schemering uitgaat. Je hoeft je er alleen maar aan over te geven om ervan te kunnen genieten. Of in huis zitten, kijken hoe het buiten 'schemert' en het licht pas aandoen wanneer het donker is. Bijna een magisch moment.

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Thank you!!