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Friday, 23 January 2026

Dusk

Poets and storyteller United invite us to write about the time of day you like best, and why












Dusk 

I like to visit dusk
when the day folds inward,
when twilight drapes a thin veil
over the land.

I step into a listening light
that, like liquid silk,
rests on red roses,
remembering their names.

The sky whispers its old instruction:
let the day loosen its grip,
let your thoughts thin
and wander among the stars.

From the black mantle of night,
let unseen hands
practice their quiet healing.

And when dawn
touches the window lightly,
open the door,
so the universe may pass
through you.


8 comments:

  1. Lindíssimo poema dessa hora mágica do dia!
    Adorei!
    beijos, chica

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  2. Cosy, clear and beautiful images. 👏

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  3. Your poem feels very warm and comforting- with beautiful imagery as well - Jae

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  4. Oh, that is exquisite!

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  5. Wonderful imagery. Love the idea of a listening light and of the universe passing through us.

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  6. Just beautiful... Rall

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  7. I love the idea of the universe passing through us at dawn.

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  8. Dear Marja, the image and poem are really beautiful!

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Thank you!!