The chosen prompt for Poets and Storytellers United: “It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.” ~ George Orwell
Reality is a dream that learned how to live
Marja
The morning struck thirteen
The morning stood upright
on a bright cold day in April.
The clock cleared its throat
and struck thirteen,
breaking the habit of time.
Rumours buzzed;
a threshold was crossed.
Pebbles skipped across the pond,
spreading ripples of truth.
People stopped
running, talking.
They watched the sky,
heard the birds sing silver songs.
The language of love bloomed,
its breath becoming a bridge
Rivers cleared,
mirroring the wisdom
of ancient trees
that wandered
like old storytellers,
whispering
the tide had turned
Fresh food rose from wet earth,
replacing factories
that once made things
the world did not need
Mirrors of ego cracked
People spoke to neighbours,
shared tools,
swapped seedlings.
Laughter stitched itself
through the streets,
the air filled
with fresh baked bread.
Loneliness faded
like mist at dawn.
The sky held happiness
as the world revealed
the quiet brilliance of peace,
still learning
how to stay.

Oh, I so wish it to be true.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! One day there will be many beautiful bridges connecting ideas wide apart like rainbows.
ReplyDeleteQue beleza! Poesia e imagem lindas! Adorei! FELIZ PÁSCOA! beijos, chica
ReplyDeleteI love how the landscape and feelings unfold - may we all find happiness and peace inside and out - Jae
ReplyDeleteExcellent imageries.
ReplyDeleteStriking thirteen turned out to be paradise under your pen. How beautifully you show what could be!
ReplyDeleteIf only it could happen. Instead of repairing our own Earth we madly spend countless billions of dollars to send people to the other side of the moon, while our home drowns in our own filth and squalor.
ReplyDeleteI am hoping for that clock to chime 13 times so we can step into such a world.
ReplyDeleteIf your poetry is a true description of 13o'clock, I want to feel time your way! Cheers.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful vision, beautifully expressed. Perhaps we still have time ...
ReplyDelete...reality is a dream that learned how to live, I like this! Thanks Marja!
ReplyDeletePositive and elegantly written
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, Marja!
ReplyDeleteElegant writing!
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