The prompt for Poets and storytellers United is letting go
Echoes
across the stretched-out land
I am Dutch,
my soul raised from the lower lands,
standing tall against the northern wind,
a guardian of Germanic threads
woven through ancient bone.
I do not come in darkness.
I rise in the pink, the red, the yellow of tulips,
a crown of colour bursting
through heavy clay.
My heart and mind were born
under an endless sky
where words are not dressed up
but reveal the naked truth.
An echo of bike bells
drifts through rainy air.
Castles and mills return
across the stretched-out land.
I let go of my roots,
left them for distant grounds
with majestic mountains
and unreal blue lakes.
When I return to my homeland,
street stones still carry
half-faded stories
of my voice
that refused to vanish.

...I'm intrigued by your homeland!!!
ReplyDeleteSão lindos esses ecos e o orgulho de tua terra!
ReplyDeletebeijos, tudo de bom,chica
Your words echo so closely my own memories of visiting the Netherlands -- the tulips, the bike bells, the endless sky.
ReplyDeleteReading this felt like stepping back into that time again. 🌷🚲
Very well written, Marja. I am so thankful that the Netherlands 🇳🇱 have a good relationship with us here in Canada 🇨🇦 ❤️
ReplyDeleteA lovely verse, Marja. New Zealand must seem boundlessly empty after the crowding of The Netherlands, but it’s good to experience anew the sights and sounds of one’s formative years.
ReplyDeleteThere is a strong sense of place running through this, especially in the way the landscape feels like it is still speaking even after distance and time. The imagery of tulips, rain, and old stones gives the writing a quiet continuity between past and present rather than a clean break. Letting go here does not feel like forgetting, but more like carrying home forward in a different form. That balance between departure and return gives the piece a steady emotional weight without needing to overstate it.
ReplyDeleteLindo poema. Me gusto mucho. Te mando un beso.
ReplyDeleteSo many images and feelings to love - I am glad you have journeyed - but can still go home - Jae
ReplyDeleteYes our roots will always be a part of us!...Rall
ReplyDeleteLoved your story!
ReplyDeletemy experience is that once uprooted-its changed forever.
I have gone back to the place of childhood and realised that roots means place, time, people and the relationship all together. Otherwise its just in memory
I can relate to your wonderful poem. We have downsized from a four bedroom suburban house to a one bedroom Senior Living apartment.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is gorgeous!!! 'I rise in the pink, the red, the yellow of tulips,
ReplyDeletea crown of colour bursting through heavy clay" ~~~ I can feel the energy. Cheers.
So good.
ReplyDeleteTe deseo una buena semana. Te mando un beso.
ReplyDeleteA glorious poem
ReplyDeleteDear Marja,
ReplyDeleteyou always find such wonderful, evocative, and emotionally resonant words - great poem!
I think a piece of your homeland always stays with you, even if you let it go willingly. But a country like New Zealand, where so many nationalities and cultures have started a new life, truly comes alive through all the stories, images, dreams (and tulip colors 😊) brought with them.
And I think it's a country to fall in love with, with its majestic mountains and unreal blue lakes.
For Edi and me, letting go will probably be more like Jim's experience, since our plan also involves moving from our house with a garden to a senior living apartment (hopefully with at least a balcony) – though not until around 2030. That's much closer to where we currently live, but still very far removed from our current way of life... and I'm curious to see how we'll manage letting go then.
Many hugs and all the best from Austria, Traude
https://rostrose.blogspot.com/2026/05/reisebericht-2025-von-ost-nach-west-auf.html
Beautiful! You transported me with just a few words. Absolutely LOVE this piece.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem, Marja! I get a real feel for the beauty you grew up in. Lovely last stanza.
ReplyDelete