Look at the blind side of writers island after you read about this blind lady. Yes the bird in this case. My poem is about that sometimes people are blindsided by their own behaviour. They don't see things from an other point of view. In this case the husband who is obviously treated badly and therefore a not so nice surprise awaits this lady. She really gets hit on the blind sideyou've hit me on the blind side
I always gave you my affection
You left me dear, it is not right
Oh cheri you're flipping flippant
Oh cheri you're flipping flippant
I thought I taught you manners too
Your stupidity took over
although I educated you
How dare you dear to leave me
How dare you dear to leave me
I gave you unconditional love,Oui moi
without me you are a cripple
you make me laugh woho haha

Such a fun poem! I guess even a bird may have such thoughts!
ReplyDeletePerfect image for your verse, here, Marja.
ReplyDeleteThat bird's expression is priceless, especially when I 'anthropomorphise'.
How bittersweet. Clever poem. I pray that it's not autobiographical.
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Hi Marja! I don't know... ;))
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Hindsight often allows us to laugh about serious situations.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully bittersweet.
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem, I have felt that way a couple of times in my life.
ReplyDeleteThis is a bittersweet tale
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Pamela
Bittersweet yes but also the lady has a blind side because of her attitude looking down on her hubby she can't see why he left her
ReplyDeletenicely done...first thing i was taught playing hockey...keep your head up and look out for the blind side...I always asked my coach I cant see the blind side...he said well you will feel it then....thanks for this
ReplyDeleteOh, gads...I had a lover go off on me like that one time. If he had looked like that bird, perhaps I wouldn't have been so concerned about his mental well being. The laugh done me in, in the end...
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Good one Marja! Loved the picture too!
ReplyDeleteLiked this a lot! Serious stuff told with a bit of...humor and cynicism. Nice job!
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