you've hit me on the blind side
I always gave you my affection
You left me dear, it is not right
Oh cheri you're flipping flippant
Oh cheri you're flipping flippant
I thought I taught you manners too
Your stupidity took over
although I educated you
How dare you dear to leave me
How dare you dear to leave me
I gave you unconditional love,Oui moi
without me you are a cripple
you make me laugh woho haha
Such a fun poem! I guess even a bird may have such thoughts!
ReplyDeletePerfect image for your verse, here, Marja.
ReplyDeleteThat bird's expression is priceless, especially when I 'anthropomorphise'.
How bittersweet. Clever poem. I pray that it's not autobiographical.
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Hi Marja! I don't know... ;))
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Hindsight often allows us to laugh about serious situations.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully bittersweet.
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem, I have felt that way a couple of times in my life.
ReplyDeleteThis is a bittersweet tale
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Pamela
Bittersweet yes but also the lady has a blind side because of her attitude looking down on her hubby she can't see why he left her
ReplyDeletenicely done...first thing i was taught playing hockey...keep your head up and look out for the blind side...I always asked my coach I cant see the blind side...he said well you will feel it then....thanks for this
ReplyDeleteOh, gads...I had a lover go off on me like that one time. If he had looked like that bird, perhaps I wouldn't have been so concerned about his mental well being. The laugh done me in, in the end...
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Good one Marja! Loved the picture too!
ReplyDeleteLiked this a lot! Serious stuff told with a bit of...humor and cynicism. Nice job!
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