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Friday, 1 March 2024

Kindness

Rommy from Poets and Storytellers United, asked us to write poetry or prose about someone who made an impression on you as a child.

I don't have any memories of people who made an impression on me when I was a child. I can remember many after that. They had all one thing in common: kindness










Kindness

Many special people added
colour and music to the ordinary
essence of my life, turning it
into moments of magic.

This shines through
in the way the bus song sounds,
since the driver made me smile
beneath the closing curtains of clouds.

This shines through
in the purple and pink hues of my spirit
after a teacher praised my perseverance.
Many promises appeared on my path.

This shines through
in the way a room brightens like a wood fire
after a doctor’s attentive care.
I nestled in the warmth of his words.

This shines through
in the way the wind makes the leaves spin
after a musician inspired me to dance.
I tasted the joy of life’s sweet fruit.

Spread your feathered wings of kindness,
be the hands and hearts that heal.
Change the world, one smile at a time;
it will be the dew on the flowers of your life.

Marja Blom

22 comments:

  1. I have long considered kindness the highest virtue, the best quality a person can have.

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  2. Kindness when you least expect it is truly magical.. I remember the strangers who helped me when I fell off my scooter on a busy road several years ago...don't know their names, now faces are blurred too...but their actions still inspire. I think I needed to read your poem today! Thanks Marja...

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  3. Kindness and compassion Marja - so true... And so beautifully and tenderly written too - Thankyou from me, Scott!

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  4. Such a good poem on kindness

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  5. I really like this line, "Change the world one smile at the time".

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  6. You wrote it soulfully and it's quite true that even a moment of kindness, a smile or glance of understanding, is at the top of life's healing list.

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  7. Smiles are contagious and also a natural 'face lift.' Shine on!

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  8. This is beautiful.

    Love this part especially:

    "the purple and pink hues of my spirit
    after a teacher praised the fruit of my perseverance
    Many promises popped up on my path"

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  9. Our world needs smothering with kindness, the kindness you have shared so beautifully with us in poem form.

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  10. I fully agree with your examples of kindness in the above lovely poem: a bus-driver's smile, a teacher's praise, a doctor's care, a musician's stimulating of dance , etc... We need more of it in the world. Kindness is at the top of human existence.

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  11. ...kindness seems to be lacking in everyday life. Pass the kindness around.

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  12. A very beautiful expression of the kindness you have been shown....one of your best !......Rall

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  13. I like how you mention the everyday, the bus driver, the teacher, the musician and doctor. The repetition. I wonder...why is it we so often remember the one who frowns?

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  14. I liked your run through some major boosters and the came to a help yourself with causing a smile to somone else.
    Jim
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  15. Smiles go a long way. In school my nicknames were Grinny, Smiley, and Sad Sack. Smiles go a long way in the flirting business also. :)
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  16. Thank you for this one. It left my heart warm and happy. I can't stop smiling. That's the wonderful thing about kindness. If we will it, it spreads wonderfully...

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  17. P.S. I really love the last line.

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  18. Little act of kindness makes the earth an Eden. Well-worded poem.

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  19. A lovely poem and a good subject. Well done!

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  20. What a wondrous poem Marja. Sometimes it takes only one act of kindness and caring to change a person's life.
    Namaste my dear friend
    Peggy xxx

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Thank you!!