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Thursday, 16 October 2025

Letting go

The prompt for Poets and storytellers United this week is gut punch
















Letting Go

I took a gut punch
when you slowly drifted from me.
I tried to catch your light in a jar,
but it slipped through my fingers.

So I released your echo to the wind
and mourned.
At the core
still,
love.

Once, my arms stretched,
inviting.

Now they rest
along my body,
rooted in the knowing
that I am my own wide sky,
able to hold
and to let go.

I’ve learned,
that love and pain
can share a breath,
that I didn't harden
that I am free.

All that I need
lives in me.

14 comments:

  1. Wow, what a wonderful poem, Marja. Simply superb.

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  2. Good for you..It's not easy to reach that state. A fine poem.

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  3. It takes a while to forgive an arrant partner. Plus they go their merry way. Trust in others too? No butterfly jar for that either.

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  4. ...letting go of the negative and holding on the positive is something we all need to do.

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  5. You really do have an advanced sensibility for poetic expression. This is a lovely, evocative verse, with meaning for all.

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  6. I love the part about the light in a jar and the arms at your side.Good resolution.

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  7. Such beautiful and tender words - how tender it is. The processing of have someone to hold, to miss and in time, move along with the memories - Jae

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  8. Everything about this feels very tender, including the tenderness the subject offers themselves at the end of the piece. We should all learn to be so loving and patient with ourselves.

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  9. Self-love is no substitute for Romance but it may need to come first.

    PK

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  10. No matter the love we lose, never lose your love for yourself

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  11. So very true. So very sad. But self-love is essential.

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  12. Een prachtig gedicht. Lieflijk en pijnlijk en met een wijze les.

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  13. We all have to learn self-love. Beautiful poem, Marja.

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Thank you!!