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Friday, 10 October 2025

October light

 A poem for Poet's and storytellers United written to the prompt October












October light

The October sun spills light on her path.
She sees only her shadow,
head bowed,
mind drifting into dark corners.

The grass opens its pockets
a crumbling piece of paper appears,
poetry carried on paper wings,
by currents too gentle to notice.
She inhales the scent of wet earth.

Lines land, waking sleeping seeds;
like a prayer, they enfold her heart,
weaving webs of hope,
threads of quiet beauty.
She carries it through her days,
a shy smile lingering on her lips.

Life trades feathers for stars,
water for words.
The October sun spills light on her path
and witnesses spring in the eyes of a woman.

14 comments:

  1. ...Marja, I wish you a beautiful spring as we enjoy our fall/autumn!

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  2. So many delicious images to savour in your wonderful poem. Each little gift of imagining opened up beautifully in each verse - Jae

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  3. I am really happy to note that October brings the same feelings in all hearts across the globe. Lovely poem.

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  4. Despair to hope, lifts me up, love it

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  5. Oh, that's gorgeous! I love the gentleness and delicacy you convey; the hopefulness and peace.

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  6. Delicate and sensitive, evocative and beautifully expressed. You have a poet’s touch indeed.

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  7. A compassionate piece and such lovely imagery of light being spilled on a path.

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  8. A beautiful reflection on the magical mood of Southern Spring as October brings all the flowers, sunshine and warming days... Well-penned, Marja!

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  9. Hi Marja - it is a lovely description of October, others' comments note your ability to write up poetic verses ... love it - thank you ... cheers Hilary

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  10. Lovely New Zealand October!

    Pris cilla King

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  11. So lovely, Marja! I love your last two lines.

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Thank you!!