The prompt for Poets and Storytellers united was to be inspired by quotes from The princes Bride. I chose "We are men of action, lies do not become us.”
The man of action
The man of action
holds a quiet refusal
to carry the world’s shadow.
He lifts light from water
as a mirror for others.
The reflection may waver
as life dances with reality,
but he waits,
knowing silence
will settle the troubled surface.
The law has a house
inside the man of action.
It stands in the shape
of fairness and justice,
a structure that does not fall.
The man of action
walks with vision.
He does not speak of horizons
he moves toward them.
And always,
lies do not become him.
He builds an altar to truth,
never burying it in roses.
It rises warm from the wet grass,
and droplets of trust
will clings to your heart.
Sit by the fire
with the man of action.
Watch the sparks
lift into the dark
And you
You only need to sit,
and breathe,
and let the light touch your face.

We definitely need more men like that.
ReplyDeleteYour imagery is beautiful—you painted such a vivid, compelling portrait of that ideal person. It honestly makes me wish I could be like them too.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful ideal! And yet I suspect you may have a particular man in mind. Indeed, I hope so!
ReplyDeleteI love the concrete imagery - it really adds to the idea of being a man of action - Jae
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing, Marja! I have a visual because of your vivid description!
ReplyDeleteLinda tua escolha e poesia,Marja! Bela descrição do cenário em versos! beijos, lindo dia, chica
ReplyDeleteDear Marja,
ReplyDeleteI wish the world had far more men (and women) like the ones you describe—people of action, free from lies. We need more of them, especially in the political sphere. I think you and I found our men of action a long time ago in our personal lives... (although mine isn't very active at the moment, as he has a bad cold... with a slightly elevated temperature...).
Thank you for your insightful comment on my new blog post. In your comment on the PREVIOUS post, you mentioned that you're coming to Vienna in August! Yeah!! I know you'll probably have a rather tight schedule for this trip—but perhaps there will be an opportunity to get a more detailed program from the organizer at some point. It would be fun if we could meet up, even if only briefly (or if we do the same sightseeing or eat at the same restaurant as you...). Edi and I would be thrilled to see you again, even if it's just for half an hour!
Hugs & love, Traude
Perhaps one day I will even meet such a man!
ReplyDelete..."We are men of action, lies do not become us,” I wish that was true of all men!
ReplyDeleteThis is someone anyone would want to sit with by the fire. You paint such vivid imagery of what all men and women can strive to be throughout life.
ReplyDeleteYour poetic man of action is the epitomy of what a real man of action should be. An amazing write!!!
ReplyDelete"El que se duerme se lo lleva la corriente" La vida es más divertida de la manera que describen tus versos. Un abrazo, Marja.
ReplyDeleteIt would be wonderful to be like them too! A man of action is rightly able to initiate moves and decide fast! Wonderful take Marja!
ReplyDeleteHank
You paint lovely pictures with words.
ReplyDeleteAs boas ações têm que se basear na verdade.
ReplyDeleteBom fim de semana.
Abraço de amizade.
Juvenal Nunes
A really vividly executed portrait of a man. Perhaps you had one in mind, but I think many people have the potential to live a life like this.
ReplyDeletei know these men... often not seen but those who carry buckets of water for those who are on fire.... truth is within water and fire... absolutely loved your post... i could not help but to sigh in thankfulness...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. You captured the absolute essence of that quote beautifully, turning it into such a grounded and powerful piece of poetry. I love the image.
ReplyDeleteYour man of action embodies truth and justice so perfectly.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words!
Hmm ...methinks Marja is in love:)
ReplyDeleteWhere are they? These men of action sound amazing!
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