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Poets and storytellers united invited us to write about a body of water, real or fictional, that holds a special place in your heart.
Lyttelton harbour is beautiful and special. Every week we walk in the hills above and we end up at The Sign of the Kiwi for coffee. The cafe is a place of laughter and chatter. Eric, the owner, passed away recently and therefore this poem is for him.
| Lyttelton harbour |
We follow the path to the summit,
where the rim of the old volcano
opens to breathless views
of Lyttelton Harbour.
The picture is ever-changing:
misty clouds drifting over the inlet,
blue and green hues
dancing across the water.
The Port Hills keep watch
over these sacred waters.
The Sign of the Kiwi
rests like a crown upon the ridge.
The wind whispers its secrets.
Arrival and departure,
it says,
are not separate.
in every remembered smile,
every story retold,
every kindness passed on.
Look, the trees still cradle
droplets of yesterday's rain.
The air still carries
echoes of laughter,
of Eric,
l'âme de la fête.
So let us celebrate
life and rain,
for water,
like his kindness,
is life-giving nourishment,
falling freely,
asking nothing in return.
The banter,
the laughter,
the generous spirit
of a Frenchman sustained us.
Now it is ours to carry forward.

Que lindo lugar e poema tão bem dedicado ao amigo Eric que partiu!
ReplyDeletebeijos, lindo dia, chica
...thanks for taking me on a word journey to Lyttelton Harbour.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful tribute to him. And oh! the beauty of those hills, the harbour and the warmth of that gathering place. Just wonderful. He will be missed and long remembered I am sure.
ReplyDeleteOh, this is lovely and heartfelt! I enjoyed the photos as well.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is a beautiful homage to Eric who truly was a bundle of joy.
ReplyDeleteLindas fotos. Me gustaron los poemas. Te mando un beso y te deseo un buen fin de semana.
ReplyDeleteDear Marja, this is just beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteA sad but lovely poem. Sorry for your loss. RIP Eric !
ReplyDeleteSuch a heartfelt tribute, Marja.
ReplyDeleteThe way you wove the harbour, the hills, and Eric’s spirit together is beautiful.
His laughter and kindness live on in your words.
Love the gorgeous photos too.
You paint a lovely picture of the harbour and the memories it contained.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful place to celebrate and also to dedicate to your friend - Jae
ReplyDeleteThe images of beautiful country, welcoming haven and friendly face all provide the proof of what your lovely, poem says!
ReplyDeleteNow it is our turn to carry it forward, now that we have received your message of goodness. The images are breathtaking, and the poem is equally moving in the way it remembers a good friend.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wistful beautiful first scene and poem expressing the flow of life and the treasured memory of a good man who is now embedded into the very fabric of this wonderful place.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery
ReplyDeleteis life-giving nourishment,
ReplyDeletefalling freely,
asking nothing in return.
He is rightly a fine person Marja! The way forward is to complement the good fortune and the things in return!
Hank
Were someone to compose a tribute like this for me, I swear I would come back from the dead to kiss them! Well done, Marja.
ReplyDeleteWhat a breathtakingly beautiful tribute to Eric. Your words about the arrival / departure meeting in every remembered smile brought a tear to my eye. Walking up to The Sign of the Kiwi for that weekly coffee will clearly hold such a bittersweet meaning now. You captured the magical view of Lyttelton Harbour so vividly, creating the perfect, peaceful setting to honor his memory. Carrying that wonderful Frenchman's laughter forward is the ultimate way to celebrate the immense kindness he shared with everyone.
ReplyDeleteSuch a gorgeous tribute. His spirit and the beauty of land around The Sign of the Kiwi come through so clearly.
ReplyDeleteWhat a heartfelt tribute to a man generous of heart . The nature seems to match his generosity as well. Yes, we must carry forward the goodness and kindness - hallmarks of humanity.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the beautiful harbor, and the tribute you wrote.
ReplyDeleteI so love to come and visit you here, dearest Marja, the wonderful shots and the touching verses you write and share are always a treat to me!
ReplyDeleteThis time you wrote a tribute which is a masterpiece, you're truly a keen poet, my Friend!
Have a wonder-filled rest of your weekend
XO Daniela @ ~ My little old world ~
Thank you so much Daniela and know you are always welcome
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