The hidden path
“Which path do I take, Master?”
“What do you want to
find at the end?”
“On wealth and power
I’ve set my mind.”
“Then choose the path
through the concrete jungle
success you will find.”
At the end, he etched
success on every window
of his room.
People looked up to it,
but it was only
a spark in his gloom.
“Master, I want more.
Which path do I take?”
“What do you want
to find in the end?”
“I want to feel free.
I want to give
a part of me.”
“Follow the path of mystery.
Share your riches
along the way.”
He walked this road
every day.
Then one day,
they stole it all.
A dark glow
coated his fall.
A lady found him,
fed him, cradled him
with love and care
in her shanty
and showed him
the path of plenty.
Where you walk beneath
the weeping willow,
and listen to the lost
and the lonely.
Where the river collects tears
and carries them
to distant pastures
to enrich the earth.
On that day,
the rain knocked
on his window.
The sky broke open
and wrapped a bow of colours
around a path
that began at his door.
“Master, why didn’t you
show me that path first?”
“Because you didn’t
ask for it, my friend.”
I love this parable......the path to happiness.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry
DeleteYou are so clever. That is a terrific poem. So sorry to hear you have Vertigo. I get that now and then,it is awful. My doctor told me to go home and watch You Tube videos on the Eply Manoeuvre and then do it. It doesn't always work the first time. I did morning and night for about 2 days and it went away.Try it:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qw1QciZWfP0
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane I will try it
DeleteHi Marja - vertigo sounds horrid - good luck with Diane's idea ... and then getting over it ... all the best.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is wonderful - so clever ... we can all dream of wonders of gold, but the easier, happier path is the simple one ... compassion and peace as we journey along ...
Cheers Hilary
Thanks Hillary
DeleteOh, what a touching poem. 'the day rain knocked on his window' - beautiful. I hope you feel better soon Marja.
ReplyDeleteThanks Juliet
DeleteI understand you created this great poem yourself Marja, it's really wonderful reading.
ReplyDeleteHope you recover soon!
Thanks Janneke I am not so clever with english words yet though
Deletewow what a great photo Love from Poland
ReplyDeleteThanks Gosia It is beautiful here in NZ
DeleteLovely, smart poem!
ReplyDeleteAs for Vertigo, try the home remedies first, and only if it doesn't help take the pills given by the doctor. Feel better soon!
Thanks Duta. I have to have approval for home remedies as I am on warfarine. The pills are just to relieve the nausea and stomach acid
DeleteHi Marja. Vertigo is a terrible thing. When I had it a few times this year I went to the doctor's and they examined me several times now. They still don't know what the matter is. Anyway I stopped cycling for fear of falling off my bike again.
ReplyDeleteYou are so clever at poetry! I admire you!
Wow than your dizziness most be quite severe
DeleteSo nice! The path.. leading to light and love...
ReplyDeleteThanks Christy
DeleteExcellent message! You speak truth.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary and uh now always
Deletemean not always lol
DeleteThanks Calvin
ReplyDeleteThis is a magical and well composed message indeed
ReplyDeleteLovely photo Marja - complements your poem. Sure hope you get relief from vertigo - not a pleasant experience.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by.
The earthquake today has made me worry about you, Marja, and all of Christchurch. Hope you are well.
ReplyDeleteThanks We are all good just shaken In towns up North it was bad.
DeleteMarja this is a wonderful poem, such a great message within it.. And a lovely photo.
ReplyDeleteMarja I just heard about the large Earthquake near Christchurch. I do so hope you are all safe.. Sending Love and hugs my friend Love Sue xxx
Thanks Sue We are good. It was scary It went on for ages. The epicentre was about 2 hours drive from here
DeleteI am so pleased Marja all of you are OK.. what a scary experience to have to go through again. xxx Love to you Sue xxx
DeleteThank you Marja. A beautiful poem -- i need to remember follow the path to simple pleasures right now. I hope you feel better soon. Take care.
ReplyDeleteHeard about the earthquake this morning, hope you guys are safe! Speaking mostly tongue-in-cheek here, but what is New Zealand's policies on taking post-election refugees from America?
ReplyDeleteThanks Beach We are all safe. About emigration As far as I know you have to follow the normal rules and apply https://www.immigration.govt.nz/new-zealand-visas/options/live-permanently If you come in depends if their is a need for your profession here and other.
Deletehttp://skillshortages.immigration.govt.nz/ Here you can check if there is a need for your skills
DeleteIk kwam even kijken hoe het met je was na de aardbeving, maar zie hier boven dat jullie veilig zijn.
ReplyDeleteDankje Marieken Met de schrik vrijgekomen Een heel mooi deel van NZ vernield maar gelukkig zijn er veel ongelukken gebeurt
DeleteMarja, i hope you get well soonest. That path above seems very inviting especially because i want to take photos of those living things there.
ReplyDeleteGlad you're ok. I do hope the cleanup doesn't take forever for you guys.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem. You certainly have a way with words.
Hope you are feeling better, Marja, vertigo is no fun!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem! Very philosophical and of course there is so much truth in it. Trouble is, wisdom rarely comes without experience and experience is usually gained with increasing age. Thus mistakes are made, only to be corrected later... Happy are the ones who learn quickly through little experience and become wise soon!