The prompt for Poets and storytellers united is a book title I choose " On Earth We’re Briefly Gorgeous"
On Earth We’re Briefly Gorgeous
And
when you crawled out
of the suffocating wreckage of life,
the simple act of standing
became a declaration carved in air.
You showed your colours,
even for a moment, like a sunset.
If its colours clung to the sky forever,
we wouldn't notice them at all.
When
words touch someone,
when you lift them like crumbs
to soothe a hunger you didn't name,
a thin current of connection stirs.
Ripples
run along the fine filaments
of the skin of the world,
and the earth becomes
briefly gorgeous.
Everything else
evaporates.
What remains drifts softly,
filling whatever space
the world forgot to hold.
Sometimes it’s those brief flashes of connection that make life feel worth it.
ReplyDeleteLoved how you tied it back to the earth being “briefly gorgeous.”
That's so beautiful, Marja, in both sentiments and expression. (I seem to be saying this, or something like it, about all your poems lately! You must have taken a quantum leap.)
ReplyDeletelovely poem... that feeling that words can bring is unparalleled
ReplyDeleteMuito lindo,Marja! Sempre gosto de tuas inspirações! beijos, chica
ReplyDeleteDear Marja, this is such a lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteYes, we all have to stop and appreciate fleeting moments. They are gone far too quickly.
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing how filling those small crumbs of connection can be. They're part of the feast of life.
ReplyDeleteLindo poema. Me gusto mucho. Ya volvi. Te mando un beso y gracias por tu cariño.
ReplyDeleteSo good!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I hope you're collecting all these and will be publishing them some day?
ReplyDelete"When words touch someone,
ReplyDeletewhen you lift them like crumbs
to soothe a hunger you didn't name,
a thin current of connection stirs."
Wonderful writing!
Oh Marja, you truly have a masterful way with words, transforming them into feelings and images. Your poem gave me a gentle, pleasant shiver. (I'm not sure if this comes across the way in English...in German it is "eine sanfte, wohlige Gänsehaut"...)
ReplyDeleteAll the best from Austria 🤗
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Your writings are being missed, trust everything is well at your end.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anon ❤️ I am fine On a family visit overseas Back end of September
DeleteThis one really stayed with me, especially the idea that simply standing after everything life has thrown at you can become its own declaration. I love how you connected that to a sunset, because we often appreciate beautiful things precisely because they do not last forever. The line about words becoming like crumbs that soothe a hunger we did not know we had also hit me because sometimes one small sentence from someone can reach a place in us that we didn't even realise was hurting. There is something very human about that kind of connection, where for a brief moment everything else disappears and you feel understood, even if nobody says it directly. www.melodyjacob.com
ReplyDeleteI love how you connected that to a sunset, because we often appreciate beautiful things precisely because they do not last forever. The line about words becoming like crumbs that soothe a hunger we did not know we had also hit me because sometimes one small sentence from someone can reach a place in us that we didn't even realise was hurting. There is something very human about that kind of connection, where for a brief moment everything else disappears and you feel understood, even if nobody says it directly.
ReplyDeleteHi Marja - yes we all have our shining moments don't we ... enjoy being home - back in Europe for your visit. Cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteRead at Traude of your Blog... and enjoyed your post very much. Yes, we can find, if we want.
ReplyDeleteGreetings by Heidrun