Awakening
Awakening
by marja
Slowly drifting, leaving life
outside my sight, shifting
inside a place where noise
expels the murmer of water
A storm of thoughts,
A rumble of thunder,
silencing the rolling waves
crashing against the boat
An orchestra of discord,
conducts a spell on
a morning when rays feet
leave sparkles on water
As swiftly as lightning
flashes of tranquillity
splashes of fresh water
awaken a blissful soul
Tuning in to soothing sound
entering paradise
while mind’s noise
leaves at the backdoor
Well done!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully-worded, so detailed and neat! Thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteBest, Mariya Koleva
http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva
Loved your words and their emphasis !!!
ReplyDeleteGreat photo and matching verse. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful images!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write!
ReplyDeleteIt is beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteWe all need minds noise to leave out the back door.....beautiful writing here! :-)
ReplyDelete...good images, good writing.
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful and such a great escape! Loved it~
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful writing,Marja!Well done!
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