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Friday, 27 July 2012

Awakening

 

Awakening

Slowly drifting, leaving life
beyond my sight, shifting
into a place where noise
fades beneath the murmur of water.

A storm of thoughts,
a rumble of thunder
silencing rolling waves
that crash against the boat.

An orchestra of discord
conducts a spell
on a morning when sunrays’ feet
leave sparkles on the water.

As swiftly as lightning,
flashes of tranquility,
splashes of fresh water
awaken a blissful soul.

Tuning in to soothing sounds,
entering paradise
while the mind’s noise
exits through the backdoor.

11 comments:

  1. Beautifully-worded, so detailed and neat! Thanks for sharing it!
    Best, Mariya Koleva
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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  2. Loved your words and their emphasis !!!

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  3. Great photo and matching verse. Well done!

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  4. It is beautifully written!

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  5. We all need minds noise to leave out the back door.....beautiful writing here! :-)

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  6. ...good images, good writing.

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  7. This was beautiful and such a great escape! Loved it~

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  8. Very beautiful writing,Marja!Well done!

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Thank you!!