Awakening
Awakening
Slowly drifting, leaving life
beyond my sight, shifting
into a place where noise
fades beneath the murmur of water.
A storm of thoughts,
a rumble of thunder
silencing rolling waves
that crash against the boat.
An orchestra of discord
conducts a spell
on a morning when sunrays’ feet
leave sparkles on the water.
As swiftly as lightning,
flashes of tranquility,
splashes of fresh water
awaken a blissful soul.
Tuning in to soothing sounds,
entering paradise
while the mind’s noise
exits through the backdoor.
Well done!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully-worded, so detailed and neat! Thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteBest, Mariya Koleva
http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva
Loved your words and their emphasis !!!
ReplyDeleteGreat photo and matching verse. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful images!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write!
ReplyDeleteIt is beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteWe all need minds noise to leave out the back door.....beautiful writing here! :-)
ReplyDelete...good images, good writing.
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful and such a great escape! Loved it~
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful writing,Marja!Well done!
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