Prompt for What's going on?
Choose a head covering—a worn baseball cap, a silk scarf, a headband, a wool beanie pulled low, a wide-brimmed hat casting shadows, or any other piece that sits on the head
Breathing cool
A cosy shop window
in Akaroa,
a basket of hats.
a flat black cap,
warm,
already mine.
Not me, yet breathing cool
the kind of cool
of writers and poets,
journalists drinking,
conspiring for joy.
Air brimming with
paper and coffee.
Lines scribbled on napkins,
a hum of shared stories,
warmth found in words.
I place the cap on my head,
walk past the cafe
the door opens:
'Marja, join us.'
Nice one! (the poem!) - Hat suits you very well and that is a wonderful smile (your photo) :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Marja - I agree with intelliblog - great smile, matching hat .. and fun ideas through the cap on your head! Lots of thoughts - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteThat’s a great photo, Marja; I’ve always thought of that style of hat as a baker boy hat. Cool indeed, and evocative of café life. I love the lines:
ReplyDelete‘Air brimming with
paper and coffee.
Lines scribbled on napkins,
a hum of shared stories,
warmth found in words.’
Your poem carries the quiet magic of a small moment transformed into belonging, where a simple cap becomes a key to camaraderie and shared stories
ReplyDeleteThat's a cool photo Marja. Love the smile. Kim's quoted lines are my favorite too.
ReplyDeleteSuch a cool hat - it suits you! I love the description of the cafe full of writers - the paper, the coffee. Reminds me of the newsroom in the afternoon when the edition had just come out - in those days in paper, with the requisite inky fingers.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it interesting how sometime you look at something (such as a hat) and feel it is already yours, that it really fits you for some reason? It definitely does look like a 'cool hat,' the kind that writers and poets would wear. I enjoyed your hat and seeing a picture of YOU wearing it!
ReplyDeleteSweet poem. Love the hat and the smell of coffee.
ReplyDeleteYou and your smile look perfect in that hat!
ReplyDeleteThey saw you coming. I would invite you in too, you look soooo good. Dare I say "cute"?
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