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Quadrille #235 "Take your poem for a whirl around the block" Posted by whimsygizmo
dVerse Poets Pub asked to pen a poem of precisely 44 words, not counting the title, and using some form of the world whirl
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| Photo Brendon Ghilchrist, Christchurch |
Whirl through wonder
Curling in my sleeping bag,
I gaze at a swirling starlit sky
in the darkest depths of night.
At Lake Tekapo, lights pinned high
whirl through wonder, tracing
the Milky Way’s endless maze,
spilling a neural network
of celestial beauty.
Mind and matter mending.
There's nothing like the Milky Way under a Southern sky. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteWondering Pilgrim
There is nothing like the Milky Way under a southern sky! well composed!
ReplyDeleteyour poem encapsulates that "whirl through wonder," so well
ReplyDeletep.s. I have been here too but never lain under these stars